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    dots Submission Name: Nothing short of euphoricdots
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    Author: majinkenshinamv
    ASL Info:    20/M/Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    7.28 - 70/50/13
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    Bytes: 911



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    dotsNothing short of euphoricdots
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    I woke up one morning to the gentle sound of a shakuhachi (bamboo flute). The morningís light crept through the window and caressed my face. Thoughts of you were the first thing that filled my mind. You wonít realize itís you when youíre reading this. Youíll probably think itís someone else I talk about. I wonít ever tell you for fear of losing your friendship, but Iím sure somewhere in your mind you know that itís you. That morning, there was something holding me here that I never want to let go. Youíre a dream for someone like me and Iíve come to accept that as hard as it is. I just have too much hatred built up and you are the last thing I truly care about. Someone like that doesnít deserve to be with anyone. I tell myself I can handle being alone but the truth is Iím a little scared. But when sadness ambushes my mind I think of your smile and life seems a little easier. Thank you.




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      This is beautiful! I am sure the person you wrote this for loves it as much as I did. I feel this way towards someone too, but I don't think he really knows it... Hmmm.
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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