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    dots Submission Name: One Should Alwaysdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Read poetry in languages that you cannot understand. Love someone unlovable. Be kind to stray animals and men. Go where nobody knows you. Want what you cannot have. Paint pictures that nobody will ever see. Throw coins in wishing fountains. Stop eating before you get full. It is good to stay a bit hungry. It is great to live life by your own rules.





    Submitted on 2004-03-29 08:59:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, if only I could stop eating that early! But then, sometimes, if you keep eating, you build up a hunger for more and more. lol. (I think I'm making excuses, now).
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by boompatah | [ Reply to This ]
      these are like the "rock the boat" rules that i read sometime back. inspiring. i'm gonna make my own rules!
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Stray animals and men........what a hoot! I enjoyed that so much!
    Me too, me too! I agree with the "stay hungry." Makes you keep striving!
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. a different style thatn the others, but nevertheless really good.
    "Throw coins in wishing fountains" remindes me of my last holiday in rome...lol
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      "Stop eating before your full. It is good to stay a bit hungry" thats the best line but for some reason it struck me as more talking about other things than talking about food. *shrugs* but i could just be crazy
    Pryncess
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by AmberJade | [ Reply to This ]


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