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    dots Submission Name: Bump & Grind For Onedots
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    Author: Brownsdelight
    ASL Info:    25/F/NUEVO MEXICO
    Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 1251/1055/115
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1819
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    Description:
       Me and munchie_1226 had this deal that we would both go home and do "homework" and write something about fornication. lol however each time I thought of fornication the word masterbation would pop into my head like the damn pop ups on the net. lol so Li Li this is my humble entry....hope you did your homework chica!


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    dotsBump & Grind For Onedots
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    I lay my head back on the
    Pillow and close my eyes
    I can almost feel your
    Warm breath upon my thighs.

    My hands slowly linger
    Over the peaks of my breast
    Amazed that just your memory
    Can make me this wet.

    Fingers slowly making
    Their way over my ribs
    Hips slowly arching reflecting
    Back on all of the things that we did.

    Breathing is getting heavy
    Breasts are raising and falling
    I bite my lip; Iím soft and wet
    Body ready, itís softly calling.

    Low moans escaping
    From my parted mouth
    As my fingers finally
    Make their way down south

    Slowly they glide in
    And out of my sugary spot
    Thighs wide spread upon the bed
    This room is just too damn hot.

    The rhythm is thumping
    As I dance alone,
    Solo bumping and grinding
    Feels so good I canít help but groan.

    Tempo speeds up, beat
    Thumping and pounding
    Legs began to shakeÖCLIMAX
    Your name in my head resounding.




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      You write some of the sexiest masturbation poetry that I have ever read...rubber duckies and now this...Bad, naughty girl.

    Amazed that just your memory
    Can make me this wet.

    I hear you. Watching that [censored] stalk around all night at work drives me wild...Now he's quit smoking, so there is a good 45 minutes a night that he doesn't have anything else to do...And guess who his favorite person to come visit is? Yeah, it's me.

    You know what drives me crazy? The smell of his skin. He asked me to hold his jacket for like, two seconds tonight, and it smelled like him. And the smell lingered in my nostrils for the next four hours. And it made me so...well, you know. This is a great poem...

    I was reading your journal...Does it ever get any easier? How long has it been for you? Our one year breakup "anniversary" was April 23rd. And I didn't say a word about it to him...He came in to work the next night and said, "Do you realize we've been split up for a year now? Isn't that crazy?" I cried for the next two hours...
    | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      ok so i'm sittin at work and i just read this and now mr. brunson has a stiffy and can't get up from his desk or it'll look like he's been gettin off under his desk...

    hey, awesome ;) you're a pro with the words, and i have to say that your poem has had a wonderful affect on me, and all i wanna do right now is masturbate!
    :p
    trey
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]
      sugary spot made me smile! I thought this poem started slow and wound up to a perfect climax. You did what you set out to d and now I have to go find my own sugary spot

    lolollol
    xxxx
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      and that name is...JIZZLE! jk. i do wish though. i'm a dirty little [censored]..so what!? very vivid picture you've painted for us prepubescent losers out here in cyber world, thank you so very much for this lovely piece on the majesty of female masturbation. thank you~nahlij
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      You got to be Fu**ing kidding me here - -
    Enjoyment, hell it was a Big- Boom-Boom waiten for the 'pay-off' then throw me overboard to cool off
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm gon do something to your sexy ass! That was quite um....interesting!

    *Where'd that white stuff come from*

    Anyway, you have a way with these exotic pieces. I got some handcuffs that'll fit your ass perfectly! Cum see me...



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    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! muy caliente Y provocativo, Yo imagino que tu es un mujer hermosa y inteligente Y un Angel de cielo. I loved your work keep it up girl.
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Lil_Santo | [ Reply to This ]
      Inspiration girl . . Thats what u r! I was a bit hesitant to write poetry about this little (HUGE) touchy subject (when it come to chicks); but this has kinda changed my mind
    **** gues what i'm up to tonight (besides writing poerty).

    Sexy work
    Keep the work up and your fingers down.
    | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by AfricanPrincess | [ Reply to This ]
      My hands slowly linger
    Over the peaks of my breast
    Amazed that just your memory
    Can make me this wet.

    Fingers slowly making
    Their way over my ribs
    Hips slowly arching reflecting
    Back on all of the things that we did.
    *******************************
    May be tonight I'll try that a bit, you make it sound so beautiful and so sweet...
    (Pretty self explanatory comment, isn't it?)
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by A_xx | [ Reply to This ]
      Oooh girl! Excellent. Except this part sounded wierd. . . out of the flow. . .

    Slowly they glide in
    And out of my sugary spot
    Thighs wide spread upon the bed
    This room is just too damn hot.


    Other than that, totally exiting!
    | Posted on 2005-02-16 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]
      I am offically protesting this poem, because men never masturbate,lol

    Ok maybe they will after reading this, ok forget the maybe,lol

    Excellent hot write even though I was robbed by not seeing it,lol
    | Posted on 2005-02-16 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      I didn't want to comment! lol I read it...why didn't I comment...ditzy me! lol

    Girl, this was nasty! uuuuuggghhh!

    You nasty thang you! lol What you was doing when you wrote this? Did you throw that pen away afterwards? Sterilize the paper? lol

    Just playing! A+ Of course.

    Can't hate on my girl now! Ghetto Angels for life. lol
    | Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... i'm kinda horny now lol... um, well yeah, so this is cool just because it PROVES that us females don't need a man to make us... climax for lack of better word (not saying that we don't WANT them, just don't NEED them)... anyway lemme shut up, but before i go i wanna commend you for having the courage to write about something like that...
    | Posted on 2005-02-14 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      YEAH, not enough poems out there about a woman, handling her own needs! Brava! Its full of insane imagery and the flow is flawless!

    i like the fact that you wrote no holds barred! its very brave. but so completely true...afterall we know what it is that we like individually.
    | Posted on 2005-02-14 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! that was hott! lol. Good job with the imagery, and you did nice in putting this all together. Sometimes...its really hard to write about this kind of stuff. Needless to say, this is a very good poem, nice job!
    | Posted on 2005-02-14 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think after reading this i might have to go take a long shower...anyways i really enjoyed this peace. Besides the erotic factor of a woman masterbating in her bed...there was some good imagery and the flow was flawless...keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-02-13 00:00:00 | by ares_nuke_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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