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    dots Submission Name: St. Valentinedots

    Author: Silencer
    ASL Info:    25/m/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 52/66/29
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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        Something a lot of people don't know about Valentines day.

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    dotsSt. Valentinedots

    Valentines day.
    My murder rhyms say.
    Happy and glad is what they say.
    Murdered twelve people on valentines day.

    Hearts, candy, hugs, and love...
    Back against the wall and a gun to your head when push comes to shove.
    A kiss, spent some time, watch a movie and off to dine.
    Some were one, twelve others were two, what a present to be murdered on St. Valentines.

    Submitted on 2005-02-14 13:59:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i'm liking this one. it's short, but it delivers a good story. the completely contrasting concepts of love and hate, pleasure and pain, life and death, are all very alive in this piece. interesting work. not your best, but still a good write. can't wait for more of your words of wisdom! ^_^
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by dark_and_dreary | [ Reply to This ]
      dude! that's really cool. its ,for lack of better word, twisted, lol. im printin this one and adding to favs. ill read your other peices another time i gotta get off and go to bed.
    | Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by _Joeysgirl_ | [ Reply to This ]

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