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    dots Submission Name: Anticipationdots
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    Author: elitegundam
    ASL Info:    25/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 68/90/20
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 248
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       I'm not really sure why I wrote this. It started off as a poem about a candle, and went wild after the first few lines.


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    A solitary flame standing out in the dark,
    a lonely candle upon the table,
    the flickering fire illuminates the corner,
    shadows dance on the bare pearl white wall.
    A single blue rose sits in a crystal vase.
    Sweet scents arising from a clear liquid,
    contained by a pair of wine glasses,
    neatly folded napkins half hidden in darkness,
    places are set for two people to sit.
    Candlelight illuminates the plates,
    floral print around the edges, rims of gold,
    anxiously awaiting the arrival of dinner.
    Indistinguishable in the darkness,
    two gloomy chairs sit, empty.
    Romantic music floats through the air,
    setting the mood for this special day,
    where two lovers soon will come,
    to gaze through the flame into each other's eyes,
    until the food has been finished,
    the candle has burnt out,
    and the melted wax hardened.




    Submitted on 2005-02-15 12:47:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is kinda cute, nice since Valentines day was just yesterday... I liked it... the romantic evening for two... mine was a little more nymphomatic... but I would have enjoyed a V-day like this. Good job.
    | Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      This is probably one of the more romantic poems I've read that didn't feel the need to sink to the depths of "how deep are my feelings for thee" or even of mentioning feelings at all. Merely physical presence, but in such a romantic way that you're sure to 'get some' :P

    Great write.
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by jer | [ Reply to This ]



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