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Submission Name: THREE ANGELS dots

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Author:	xtremegentleman
ASL Info:	22/m/FL
Elite Ratio:	3.57 - 595/778/82
Words:	97

Class/Type:	Poetry/Passion
Total Views:	510
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	681

Description:
This one is for my three elite ladies. Mad love for y'all. You know who you are.

THREE ANGELS dots

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Flying without wings, beautiful things
Staring in the eyes I dream beautiful dreams
Three angels...Sickly Satan seems to attest
But the elegance is power...Sickly Satan must rest

Sweet angels with the most charming words
Flying as low as X's ego...that's as high as the birds
Angels proclaiming life through the power of verbs
With the stature of hood models...equipped with the curves

Nothing can break them, no one can separate them
They play in the air. Who can deflate them
All three with the characters of beautiful queens
Standing before me spreading their beautiful wings

Submitted on 2005-02-15 15:53:31 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Aw, I wish I was one of the angels . Just kidding, wow, this was nice. Lucky b*tches lol.

"Sweet angels with the most charming words
Flying as low as X's ego...that's as high as the birds"

Yeah, 'bout that ego of yours...
| Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
  Brian, I truly loved the sentiments of this piece. To be perfectly honest, I would really like to see you go back to this and smooth a few of the rough edges on it, you have the makings of a truly splendid piece. Take a few moments and really read it and see if my points aren't well taken.

You have incredible talent for your age, now just refine it a bit.
| Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Spin-A-Tale | [ Reply to This ]
  awwwww, i just saw it! too too sweet...

thats a keeper...(looks like you're in a better mood!)

thanks for the luv Charlie!

cowgirl angel
-nikki
| Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
  *bravo* You are sooo good with words. Truly. This was my favorite. So I will add it.

Where you been hidin all day? You been missin the Angels clown. lol

You are a gentleman. And Xtreme is the perfect prefix.

Kiss kiss

Li Li
| Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  Short sweet and beautiful...hmmm kinda like me! lmao jk

but fa real that was a tight lil piece, thanks for the shout out Charlie.

Your Angel,
sugary sweet brownsdelight
| Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a great write, It makes me think about my own three angels. I have three daughters, and I just read thsipoem to them, there were tears in the oldest one's eyes, We all enjoyed this. thank you
wendy
| Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by RJCHANDLER | [ Reply to This ]
  Hello to you my brother...
You are a powerfull writer...Mna i am really feeling this peice.

love these lines:
"Angels proclaiming life through the power of verbs
With the stature of hood models...equipped with the curves".

And in the last line i get that you are very confident in all 3 angels displaying for u...

want to see more..
| Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by ariesmind | [ Reply to This ]
  First, let me guess who they are,without ever talking to you about them, Stolie77, munchie and browndelight all great choices by the way.

I can say this, they are all sassy brats with style. I think its so kool that you place your feelings about them to the world,bravo

love these lines:
"Angels proclaiming life through the power of verbs
With the stature of hood models...equipped with the curves".

cool fun good write
| Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey Xt-man ;0)

Very nice poem, with a good wording, flow and rhythm. I liked reading it, and read it a couple of times ;0) I especially liked :

Flying without wings, beautiful things
Staring in the eyes, I dream beautiful dreams ..

Keep writting ;0)

KNS
| Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by KNS | [ Reply to This ]

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