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    dots Submission Name: )))Casting Stones(((dots
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    Author: Wynne Devereaux
    ASL Info:    23 yrs.old/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 152/211/53
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 348
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       I believe this piece is pretty self-explanatory...I guess I could say it feels a hell of a lot better to walk and operate in the purity of HIS peace.


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    dots)))Casting Stones(((dots
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    It was like the rippling effect...
    the result of five polished stones thrown
    across the water's surface.
    They spread out wider and wider until they vanished...
    Something interesting and hypnotic...
    so much akin to life and the disappearance of
    problems and those poisionous 'life-fumes,'
    Life constantly seems to leave behind.
    Today I caste the first stone against
    doubting myself...
    against forgiving myself...
    against my past...
    against the things in my present...
    against any and everything negative
    that I or any other could use to abuse and quickly
    pull me down.
    I lit the fuse and watched it all burst into vivid flames.
    I see and I saw the light at the end of the tunnel...
    suddenly there is a open space in my own
    immolation scene...I can pass through the fires
    uscathed or scorched.
    The oveture of self-deprication, destruction and estimation's changed abruptly for a vorspiel of pure
    melodious and legato harmonies in a Major Key.

    I caste the first stone and watched the surface of life's
    ill's become disrupted.
    I watched it become disturbed and confused...
    In its confusion, I finally grabbed the strength to walk on by and disassociate myself from that liquid fusion...
    Today...
    I walk sun beams, sipping a glass of moonlight with the light sprinkle of dew to cool my skin.
    Today i'm operatingIn Paradisum;
    Today I...simply wash myself in HIS peace.


    Wynne D.
    2005




    Submitted on 2005-02-16 19:33:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the words.. the meanings behind them.. the way you express it all here. I think I need to get up and recite this to myself every morning, just to get off on the right track...lol.
    It's lovely!
    There's something about the rhythm and flow that needs fixing .. but overall a good write.
    The message is clear. Your words are articulate.
    A couple of spelling errors.
    An enjoyable, encouraging read.

    Take Care!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo my friend....you have found the light at the end of the tunnel and walked through it.
    For now the past is nothing more then just that...past.


    Peace and Harmony

    Shawn
    | Posted on 2005-02-16 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      wow for serious... this is something else boy. ive never read anything like it!
    i love the feeling it has... the idea it gives me that you are throwing out the old win skins of doubt and unforgiveness etc etc and getting new wine skins so you can put new wine in it... you know what im on about...?
    its full of hope and i am so wanting my world to be as this poem says also...
    i love how it all comes back to god... always... i love that about you!
    and the ripple effect... things come and go but god is ever there and ever constant... YAY!
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the line "I walk sunbeams, sipping a glass of moonlight with the light sprinkle of dew to cool my skin"...
    That is a very vivid picture of a peaceful rest, way to go!
    | Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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