i enjoyed reading this. i feel i've been there before. and still may be. i think you can work on your wording and your rhyme scheme, but other then that your poem is very in touch with reality. good writing. keep on keep'n on.
Limbo, yes I lived there for a while, and it causes one to not remember clearly, and the questions of life are rather confusing, especially to vivitors. however it is bet to be a nice place to vivit, not a good one to live in, Oh that was so cliché!
what this piece lacks in rhyme scheme it makes up for in emotion so good job on that if you could have kept the rhyme scheme simple but to the point that would have been god but hell thats hard to do good job on puttng a sincere and personal look on the farewell of a stranger