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    dots Submission Name: Nowdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 854
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    Bytes: 129



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       I just felt so peaceful and happy on my way to work - blessed are we, truly...all we need to do is stop and look around and within...
    LOVE, PEACE, JOY!!!


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    dotsNowdots
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    Arise to greet the day
    arms uplifted
    soul enlightened
    be the smile that knows
    no bounds
    LIVE




    Submitted on 2005-02-17 12:10:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Energetic and motivating this minute but powerful rant works like a cup of coffee... WAKE -UP and LIVE . I like this poem Tiffany but not as much as the others I have read by you... still a refreshing read! `always appreciating Cheryl
    | Posted on 2005-04-04 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      simple and straightforward. i wish more people lived this way. i've been disenchanted with some of the nasty stuff going on around here lately. bless you for your positive and uplifting attitude! the world needs more people like you.

    ~Shalom
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      What a pleasant way to greet the day. As with most of your writings, short and sweet yet enough words for a person to draw a lot of positive visualizations from. You have such a great gift for that. This one is definately going on my favorites...whooo-hooo. Good job my friend.
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, that's a nice little thought. I agree with magnicat that I like your attitude. There's always nastiness going on in this world, and more people should think this way. I like the minimalism in this. Boundless smiles, Amy
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      Well you have some positive attitude. Wake up, can't wait for a new fresh start. Wow thats beautiful. I never really thought of it before. I usually hate getting up. lol...
    wow thats something I got to think about.
    I really liked this write. Your such an inspiration.

    ~stephanie~
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
      hummm this sounds like how me and the elite angels felt yesterday we were just posting gospel lyrics on eachothers pages. The Lord is good and yes we are blessed! I will say an Amen and bravo for this short sweet and well deserving post!
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      short and sweet. your a real perky, happy, pious person aren't you? If i was thinking straight right now I would have really liked it, but I'm not. I found the meaning in it quite powerful and helpful though. It actually kind of brightened my dark mood.
    | Posted on 2005-02-28 00:00:00 | by dead,yetalive | [ Reply to This ]


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