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    dots Submission Name: Not Without a Costdots
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    Author: mavrrick
    ASL Info:    21/Male/MA
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 143/208/67
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 442
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1343



    Description:
       I wrote this after some "interesting" events in my life. I think after writing this I was able to get over the repercussions of the events and move on. This is in no way an attack on someone and not meant to hurt anyone, just a method of venting. Those concerned know how I feel now.


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    dotsNot Without a Costdots
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    There was a time when you needed help
    And I was there to lend a hand
    Doing what I could do for you
    Just seeing if I could understand
    Why your were so depressed with life
    And why your heart was filled with strife

    So I invited you into my domain
    Sharing everything that I had with you
    Hoping that it would disperse the darkness
    Letting in a light that shown anew
    On a world that you thought was dark
    And on chances that were yet to spark

    Thus you followed me into my world
    Unsure of where this path might track
    And you found much more than you hoped for
    Nothing in the world could hold you back
    From basking in the warmth of light
    And from reveling in your own delight

    But none of this was without a cost
    You took over my life, pushed me aside
    Made me feel a guest in my own life
    Leaved me usurped, forced to the outside
    Of what was once mine, but not anymore
    And of the world I once knew before

    And when things turned quickly sour
    You gave me back the life you stole
    And left me in an awful spot
    Nowhere to hide within this hole
    That you had dug when you began
    And that you still dig because of a man.




    Submitted on 2004-03-29 17:06:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOVE it... the flow that starts it off is excellent.. the word choice is good, shows great emotions with images..this ones retiring to FAVs
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by drkpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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