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    dots Submission Name: Love 101dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       I snuck off early from work to enjoy LIFE
    and have supper and wine with a friend!
    Cheers 2 All!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsLove 101dots
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    Broken Shells
    Broken Glass...
    The Wind Smiles
    at "IT'S" Pass....
    Singing Birds
    Deep Green
    Grass..
    Go Outside and
    "YOUR" in Class.




    Submitted on 2005-02-17 18:08:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Escape, wonderful escape can do so much for one's outlook and the flow of ink in one's pen. I love what you have created in a few short but descriptive words.
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by Spin-A-Tale | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this a lot, it was short and I found it quite catchy. Though I wasn't entirely sure of the significance of the capitalization of "IT'S" and "YOUR". I just assumed that those were supposed to be said with a bit more emphasis, but I'm not entirely sure. The title, in particular, was what caught my eye and attracted me a to the poem in the first place.
    And sometimes it really is wonderful to just sneak off for a while, enjoy life for all that it has to offer (especially over supper and wine).
    Over all I really liked the sing-song flow of words and the way the reoccuring rhyme sort of strung each line as well as the whole piece together.

    much love,
    -Emma
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by Emma_closes | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. Some part of it twisted my tongue like a tongue twister. Lol. I really liked this poem.
    Than I had to read it over. But very catchy
    good work...
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
      That was a great read. I can totally "SEE" you doing that...heck yeah...oops, I mean yes.
    The significance is it makes the reader want to get out and enjoy nature. Appreciation instead of finding tourist trash in the wilderness. Very well done...
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Do you want all twelve questions answered?
    I think not! nicely written and so few words to say, the world is a classroom, sorry to say though Room 101 is usually reserved for things we really do not want to study! DA! that was it!
    Cool job.
    | Posted on 2005-02-23 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      What a simple yet so beautiful poem. Especially about love...Wow. That was amazingly beautiful.

    The wind smiles at It's pass

    That was brilliant. Love is in the air.

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    | Posted on 2005-02-28 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]


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