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Never again...


Author: Eagle
ASL Info:    20, M, Australia
Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 22 /48 /18
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Description:


Sigh...

Society today...


Never again...



Alone ,
Surrounded by an empty world,
Of hate, crime and injustice.

Cornered by a whirlwind of abuse,
A tidal wave of violence and hate.

Never again shall this world be of peace.
Never again shall this existance of mine be left alone,
Never again shall this planet be rid of the virus that is humanity.

Never again...




Submitted on 2005-02-17 20:34:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's an okay poem basically about issues that are out of our reach which sucks! The poem itself is okay, could of put more towards it something gripping and lively. But that's just my op. Peace & stay safe...
| Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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