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    dots Submission Name: My sole is dark.dots
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    Author: Rail
    ASL Info:    18-m-Washinton state
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 117/80/13
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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       Just another one of my rantings.


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    dotsMy sole is dark.dots
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    My sole is dark.
    Where is my light?
    Where has it gone?
    When did I loose it?
    Why did I loose it?
    Can I ever get it back?
    Is there any way to rekindle the flame?

    But wait…
    Do I what this light?
    How could I handle it?
    I’ve been in darkness for so long.
    Would I know how to live?
    Would I just die?
    If I died would it really be that bad?

    What is there to live for?
    What is there to die for?
    What is the point at all?




    Submitted on 2005-02-17 21:42:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm. made me think. think about life and its ways. actually. small words speak out more. yours did. you could have gone deeper but i say its fine the way it is. liked how you said you want it back but thought of its consequence(spekked it wrong i know). common thing people do. especially me. lovely words.

    -soomie
    | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]
      i no exactly wat u mean cause my few friends say that i should stop being like a goth all the time. but if i did i no that i couldn't handle it at all. if it's not you don't go for it. anyway i noticed u spelled soul like the sole of yer shoe and i no that u didnt mean it to come out like: the sole of my shoe is dark. the rite way to spell that would be soul.
    anyway great job!
    c ya around,
    mheracai
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by Saphire Twiligh | [ Reply to This ]
      ok, i get the intnet of it, but isn't there a more original way to say this? i also think you mean 'soul' (spirit) rather than 'sole' (bottom of a shoe). then again, maybe not...
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Meh yes I messed up and misspelled soul... I hate English... anyways...
    | Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by Rail | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting.... I see where you're coming from and I think you got your point across. Liked the flow of it, great job, keep up the good work ^_^
    ---Save the Queen---
    | Posted on 2005-02-20 00:00:00 | by Save the Queen | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice work. I like how this poem makes you really think. I think by keeping it short you got your point across better. I personally wouldnt change a thing

    -Selene :-)
    | Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]



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