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    dots Submission Name: Passiondots
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    Author: ariesmind
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Atlanta
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 75/79/18
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 271
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       Just a fantasy in my being..


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    dotsPassiondots
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    Staring in those eyes
    I revise... I remember

    Dont i know u???

    Is it possible for lovers to transcend from past lives.

    Here i stand naked and breathless

    Hearts race, Lips meet
    Fingers caress the small of my back.

    The heat rises, pressing our prize against each others thighs.

    "Turn around" ..passion wispers in my ear

    My neck
    My back
    My waist.

    Tongue venturing near the epicentre of connection

    Suddenly wet
    Loose enough for entry.

    Ready,Set....Go

    Ahhhhhhhhh.....

    Bodies in unison
    Slow and sensual

    Moans and eruptions fill my soul

    In love









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    ||| Comments |||
      *Smiles* Ah...love. *Smiles* Or that little brief interlude with the one you lust. Either way this was a very...passion invoking poem. Very sensual. Excellent job. No fear and no holding back. I like that.
    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      great poem..it was really sensual I'll give you that. I liked it. Good job...full of passion and most definately not holding back. I liked that. No one ever gets anywhere if they're holding back.

    Blessed Be!
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by Sarah Leger | [ Reply to This ]
      pressing our prize against each others thighs

    It was well said, I too believe it is possible for lovers to transcend from past lives, but only when I am trying to convince someone who is out of my league. Women love a guy with a good sense of humor, thank god.
    -Trouble
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by Death of Death | [ Reply to This ]



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