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    dots Submission Name: hounddots
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    Author: slybee22
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    5.59 - 93/64/27
    Words: 247
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 234
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1353



    Description:
       It is about a soul lost or rather trapped with in it own mind. at some point the voice soul speakes as if to some one else there that the other represents humanity.

    As it tries to find it way back to actuality it develops a second personality.
    It converses with it, thinking it is a friend separate of itself, and describes it as paranoia.
    This new person with in the same body know what it is, it also realizes that if they stay where they are in the mind , insanity is inevitable.


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    I have lingered in this forest of confusion far too long and I have lost all reason.
    I walk aimlessly searching for what I do not know and it has being so long.
    Lost on a quest for deliberation, funny is it not.
    Paranoia has become my greatest and most trusted of friends.

    There! In distance it is pure insanity; can you not see it?
    It is there for I can (not only) see it but feel its essence nearing my own.
    Come, let the pace of our feet quicken else it may be upon us in an instant.

    My heart beats faster, my toes no longer numb.
    Visions of fulfilment and bliss run through my mind.
    As I feel prickles of tiny needless run through my thumb.

    I have realized now that I am running.
    I do not remember starting and I have no thoughts of stopping, but why am I running.
    Why are we running, why!

    The hound of in sanity is nearing us.
    Are you still unable to see?
    It is at hand, there no there, there….
    I bid you let our pace quicken we must be close we are almost out.

    Underneath my many layers my sweat soaks me.
    It is still there, and closing in on me now
    Ripples of fire burn through me, fueling me, there is no stop in me; I will make it out we will make it.





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      Us creative sorts often feel insanity but oft it is misunderstood. I liked your title for this piece and I think your description sets the stage for a good analogy. I really liked the last sentence. It can't catch you don't worry! he he he
    Great Friday and Love, Peace, Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-02-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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