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As time passes by me Things suddenly become clear No longer is it hard for me to see I do all of this for you my dear Life is one big jigsaw Each individual with their own jagged edges Dance around the lyrics of man's law And jump about on top of green hedges Take my advise son Live your life like there is only you Do what you think is fun And respect others where respect is due Take the trip Smoke a bowl Do the dip Roll the roll Peace from within you will rise Hands will lift up their cup No more laughter at other's demise And soon the world will cheer up Live by these guidelines You're sure to be happy Be sure to watch the signs And never be too snappy |
hey hun I like this think u did a good job. All I can say is to try rhyming 4 lines with the lat word rhyming give it a try.| Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ] | ya I liked this it seemed to have a flow and speak trueth. very cood job. | | Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ] | I think you did a good job on this. I like poetry that rhymes and speakes the truth. I sometimes wonder if some people have ever herard of the word respect. | | Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by Lady Vicious | [ Reply to This ] | |