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Author: Holy Wood
ASL Info:    27/F/TX
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Words: 141
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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dont know where this came from


As time passes by me
Things suddenly become clear
No longer is it hard for me to see
I do all of this for you my dear

Life is one big jigsaw
Each individual with their own jagged edges
Dance around the lyrics of man's law
And jump about on top of green hedges

Take my advise son
Live your life like there is only you
Do what you think is fun
And respect others where respect is due

Take the trip
Smoke a bowl
Do the dip
Roll the roll

Peace from within you will rise
Hands will lift up their cup
No more laughter at other's demise
And soon the world will cheer up

Live by these guidelines
You're sure to be happy
Be sure to watch the signs
And never be too snappy

Submitted on 2005-02-18 17:09:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hey hun I like this think u did a good job. All I can say is to try rhyming 4 lines with the lat word rhyming give it a try.
| Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
  ya I liked this it seemed to have a flow and speak trueth. very cood job.
| Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
  I think you did a good job on this. I like poetry that rhymes and speakes the truth. I sometimes wonder if some people have ever herard of the word respect.
| Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by Lady Vicious | [ Reply to This ]

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