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    dots Submission Name: The Allydots
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    Author: kjb
    ASL Info:    21/male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 256/351/64
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 301
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 451



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       about friendship. that helps us but it takes us to pull all the way through.


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    dotsThe Allydots
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    this time it stung
    it burned like hot coals
    insults cutting the heart
    judgment ill placed
    snickers surrounding
    fingers jabbing the soul
    smiling trying to hide the emotion
    felt a pat on the back
    turn in defense
    It's an ally
    smiling truthfully
    snickers stop
    fingers are down
    hands shake in gratitude
    "Anytime." the ally says





    Submitted on 2004-03-29 18:48:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i love how you portrayed friendship so beautifully in so short of a poem. *excited about this one* really this is going to my favs.
    | Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like everything i've seen, written by you so far. I love this one, and It's going in my favorites...
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]
      Its interesting how you compare friendship and "the alley". This shows why this site is so awesome. You read so many new intriging things, and learn so many new ways @ looking at something. Great work
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by roxygirl239 | [ Reply to This ]



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