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    dots Submission Name: Earth wishdots
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    Author: ariesmind
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Atlanta
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 75/79/18
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 275
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    dotsEarth wishdots
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    Everyone!!!!
    Stop
    Breathe
    Exist
    As forces of energy come full circle
    Realise life is purposefull
    Restrain from death
    Proceed with love
    Follow with overstanding
    Lead with understanding
    Protect the innocent
    Correct the guilty
    Help the earth remember her children.




    Submitted on 2005-02-19 17:31:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well these are certainly nice thoughts and I can't believe no one has commented on this piece yet. Guess I will just have to be the first this time. Not only are these nice thoughts but sounds like good advice as well. Would'nt it be great if everyone follow this in rreal life?
    Enjoyed the read...
    !Doc~
    | Posted on 2005-02-19 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]
      I really connected to this piece and the positive message resounding from the few words. Perfect. I like pieces that make you realize there is another way; not the social or popular way to view life/existence/purpose. Keep it up! Hey say hey ya 2 the AT/GA - I used to live in Savannah several years ago when I was in the Army. I love GA! Great day 2 u! Love, Peace, Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-02-21 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it ...short and mellow but bursting with meaning...I'll probably memorize it because I tend to forget [censored] like this, the true meaning of life...looking above the hustle of the heads and into stars. You know when stress a kill cuz you have a f*ck ing busy day and then likkle breeze lick yuh..and yuh rememba dat yuh don't jus live for dat day and dat purpose but som'n bigga and betta and more earthly is there for yuh to pursue...Happy to see that somebody's on the page that I aspire to reach...I love the name...and I love "Follow...Understanding"...looooved it!
    By the way I'm not sure if "realise" is spelt correctly...it may just be the English spelling???
    | Posted on 2005-03-07 00:00:00 | by rytrsbloc | [ Reply to This ]



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