Description: i wrote this a long time ago, just digging through my files here, i kinda liked it. up until the last couple lines, it makes sense, a little, and then it kinda, blah....but thats up for you to decide
after -------------------------------------------
leaving behind that which we once sought
shadows befallen unto your soul
never before did we depart
into the mists of hell beyond
to return was a word that was without meaning
death was familiar and always taken
warrior pains, flit away
magics are no aid here
retreating back observing the black
dissuade those you love
i lost what i sought most
beneath the illicit sanctuary
quench the thirst for drink so dire
prior fortune awaits you
pass below the grotto, driven to feast
sink into my fiery touch
madness stalks within you
converted fatigue
a kiss so wrought
poisonous words capture your timid heart
never once never again
never were you so vain
Hmmm... this poem has an interesting flow and a great word choice, but I'm not exactly sure I got the whole message of it. But I did like it, so good job ^_^ ---Save the Queen---
I like the flow. It is full of imagery and emotion. As Save the Queen said it is a little unclear... but i like that. It leaves room for the reader to make their own assumtions. :) Good write!
Submission Name: after
