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Author: RJCHANDLER
ASL Info:    30/F*GA
Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 44 /68 /23
Words: 79
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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this is just a cheap venting poem, i feel better now


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Don’t walk away from me again
we need to talk this out
don't avoid looking into my eyes
what is this all about?

Don’t act like you don’t know me
we were friends before
don’t run away, just talk to me
I want nothing more

Don’t assume you know what I will say
you only wish you knew me that well
if you think I am here to ask you back
then you can go to hell.!!!!!




Submitted on 2005-02-21 02:43:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, I really like this poem!
I really like it, I like it so much that I don't know what else to say but GOOD JOB!
Keep up the GR8 work!
| Posted on 2005-02-21 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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