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    dots Submission Name: My Mind Cannot Be Censoreddots
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    Author: Cai
    ASL Info:    17/f/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 1162/401/71
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Mind Cannot Be Censoreddots
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    I just want to jump up
    and do something on an impulse.
    No inhibitions lighting my way
    just my own decisions
    in my own mind.

    I want to let my hair down
    and let mascara run down my eyes
    while not caring what the other thinks.
    I want to call out the things
    I've been wanting to say my entire life.

    I've been censored
    Had a rectangular block put on me
    A beep alter my words.
    I'm expected to accept and follow this
    But they'll never change what goes on inside my mind...




    Submitted on 2005-02-21 07:58:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this. i feel as if everything i say has to be censored so you writing this really makes me happy. censors are everywhere so people don't really say whats on their mind. this was good.
    | Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...this brought a smile to my face...rock on cai! ive been donw in the dumps lately but this really brought my spirits up...i love th part about the mascara running down your face...total free spirit mood...

    love it...adding to favs list

    Rhaine
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      This kind of reminds me of a song I've heard before.

    I like it.

    It's a bit short but that's not always necessarily a bad thing.
    | Posted on 2005-02-21 00:00:00 | by QueenCrimson | [ Reply to This ]
      You can be who you want to be, you can say and do what you wanna say and do - you are a free spirit so I say YOU GO GIRL, DO WHAT YA WANT!
    | Posted on 2005-02-21 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write. I think everyone can relate to this poem. I really like how you get strait to the point and say exactly how you feel. I agree do what you want, who cares what they think if they dont like it. oh well. Once again great poem.

    -Selene
    | Posted on 2005-02-21 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]



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