Looking up into the gray sky and I see the sun trying to peak out telling me, why.
Why the world should be happy?
Why the children should be love, and
I sit there looking,saying, thinking "Why isn't the world happy? Why aren't the children loved?Why can't we all just put aside our diffrences and try to get along? Why can't we just have one day, one day where's there's peace through out the world, with love and harmony instead of hatred and loathing?"
Hmm 3rd poem written about the skies! You write these poems as you got up? I like this one! Hmm I personally think the world isn't happy and it's been awhile since it's been! Good write keep it up peace & stay safe...
This is a really good poem, so full of heart! I wish I could answer these questions for you but some things in this world just don't make sense and there's a lot of pain in the world... it is unfair isn't it?
I would take out the second comma in your title unless you really just want to list the words 'clear', 'grey' and 'sky'. but I think you meant 'clear, grey sky'. anyway your poem deals with questions that a lot of people ask themselves and that are unanswerable. but in my opinion this is unfinished. I wanted to have some sort of ending. your first sentence made me currious but I didn't get anything besides those questions that I can't answer. that's not really satisfying. and it ends so sudden. give it a real ending. one that shows how desperate and lost the world is or one that is pleasant. that's up to you. but you leave your reader hanging here. you don't really have to answer the questions. just tell about a little incident which makes your view on those questions visible.