Description: the title is "Uncaged from the twisted tongue" aka "I dont believe it love"......enjoy
uncaged from the twisted Tongue -------------------------------------------
I wanna write a love poem
but I'm not in love.
I don't blush thinking about his smile
or lie awake at night
tossing, turning, wishing he was next to me
wait by the phone,
convincing myself that he's just not at home
because the thought that he just doesn't care
is alittle too much to bare and I
hang on his every word
cause that thought is just absurd
I am too much like a bird
to be caged on his twisted tongue
I wanna write a love poem,
wish I could write a love poem
but I don't believe in love.
don't worry about, love poems are silly. The use of "wanna" adds emphasis to the sense of apathy I get from this poem. Why write a love poem when there is no powerful feeling of love to bring inspiration? It's interesting how bird adn absurd sort of randomly rhyme out of the blue. It could use a little moe description, but i like the title ~VanillaLeaves
I like this. it's opposite of what everyone else seems to put out there, which is refreshing. and sometimes I don't believe in love either-I think it's akin to an addiction and the withdrawal is more painful than any drug. so I have to give you kudos for this one!
i like this too, its kinda a love poem about love lol. i however do believe in love, but you have portrayed so well what loving someone can do to a person in the negative. tossing and turning, losing sleep etc. i think it could use a little punctuation, but then again im kinda a punctuation nazi so dont mind me. other than that i like it