What a wonderful day it has been
soccer balls flying
and bruises being made
It's days like this i know Im alive
The body to body contact
The sweat, and the pain
Makes me happy
It came today
The letter of my collegiate future
Ive been accepted for 2009
CNU all the way baby
now all i need is to calm down and tell my mom
she'll be happy, so Ill be happy
Hooray for happiness
No sarcasm meant so dont look for any
Best day of my life
The day soccer started
and the day, my college spot was made
I still miss friends more than anything
but for now
happiness is ok
because i deserve it every once and awhile
If i can you can!
Now to stop being so happy, and feed my stomache...
Ill be even happier!
Yay! I know exactly what you mean in this poem. There's no feeling in the world - not seeing the guy you like, not making an A on that blastedly hard test, not anything - that's quite like that adrenaline rush that comes from running full out after that round, black and white sphere, crashing into other players, getting a mouthful of mud, blood splattering your jersey... okay, maybe no blood but yes, I'm completely there with you. The part about being alive... there really is hardly anything like that feeling of elation, so pure and unspoiled by all of the unhappiness in the world. Thanks for sharing! -Secret
i can't say i really feel this one all too well. I guess i can't connect. but i don't think the structure helps all that well. I don't know i can't see soccor being somthing that's like write worthy, but then again i'm not into sports like at all so that's probably just me.
i do really like the end of this though, it's like saying yeah it's ok to be happy i deserve it which is cool
hehe the feed my stomic part was the part that actully made me happy. you are the only one who had a happy poem tonight. everyone esle is some sort of love and sadness. it was actully almost to happy for me. but you did it it is indeed a happy poem. -snuff
I like it! Although I didn't find anything wrong with your other poems...I don't want to be mean but you seemed, uhm, detatched? I think thats what I'm looking for. Like this was something that you only did for others (which you said it was, so I don't know why I just told you...) You do deserve to be happy!
O my sweet titty [censored] jesus, what a hot-ass picture. did u do her? or at least knock her the fvck out for biting ur lip like that? anywayz, lets get down to business: What a wonderful day it has been hairy balls flying and bruises being made on my supple anus It's days like this i know Im homosexual The body to body contact [ this is soo hot ] The sweat, and the pain [ the blood ] Makes me happy:what the fvck is your problem. u gotta find a chick thats been around, maybe not such a virgin that u make her bleed, cuz im sure u don't have much of a penis. ummm... pretty goo, pretty good. eat sh1t and fvck a goat