Nicely written however it could of been longer I liked it though simple & funny! You should of made it longer it was a nice read, and to satisfy myself I had to read it 3 times! Hopefully there will be a revised version that'll have more to it let me know, peace & stay safe...
Hmm, you can try writing what you feel at first, or try writing without pausing to think. You can always revise if you're dissatisfied with the result ^_^ what you have is indeed good, and I think it could pretty much stand on it's own, but it's your choice to add more into it! Who knows, maybe if you add some more it will become better.
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