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    dots Submission Name: Burning Bushdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 703
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 274



    Description:
       My best friend took a picture of a manzanita tree and the blue sky and I put it on Kodak shop and made it psychadelic...so the blue turned vibrant turquoise and the manzanita tree turned like fire. The grass was the deepest of deep green. Just playing around but fun!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    Great day 2 All!!!
    Epiphany ; > }


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    dotsBurning Bushdots
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    Do not fear the
    burning bush
    nor the psychadelic
    sky...
    Embrace the Day
    vibrant color
    let Love Butterflies
    sigh...
    Light floatz by
    taken in
    breath...
    Darkness only appears
    2 B
    death.




    Submitted on 2005-02-22 15:28:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this but just a little critique would be the b i like it but you no someone will crack off it a little more imagery will give it a lot more fire great topic thats why i wanted to read maybe 2 stansas for your thought no bad intent given just a thought
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I think u did the pic justice with your imagery.

    Without the pic for people to see, makes it lose just a bit. because human nature is to compare things.

    good write
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      "Let love butterflies sigh"...great line. I really liked it. I am partial so I can see the imagery flow into my minds eye as I read along and can truely appreciate what you have said. Short and sweet as usual from you, yet vivid imagination shines through. Good write.
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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