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    dots Submission Name: Garden of Edendots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 534
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 824



    Description:
       This is just one of the things I do with some of my pieces. This was on the back of a picture of a reflection in a pond that looked like a tree turned upside down and it looked like an angel sitting under the tree...tres trippy!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    Epiphany ; > }


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    dotsGarden of Edendots
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    Garden of Eden
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    f
    to Life
    v
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    He
    a
    p
    Appreciate
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    go LOVE!
    p
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    a
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    y...; > }




    Submitted on 2005-02-22 15:35:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This didn't turn out as I typed it so it doesn't make sense...better luck next time! Epiphany
    : > } Love, Peace, Joy!
    I need to type more so I can post this so here I am...this was a word-building exercise but again, it didn't quite turn out as I had typed it!
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      this one is funny you should leave it a good reader or writer will make their own thought of this cause the title opens up the door to anything
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      thanx for your comments on the three poems i suggested i guess the only three left i dont no why i deleted the other 100 or so just another chapter of my life i guess . your comment on what i said imagine this word makes many lights come on you should write on and title it imagine i already have but deleted a long time ago good luck and thanx again
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know what this is saying or what it is. Can you clarify it please. This is a bit confusing. i know it didn't come out as you thought but please do something.
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this was a quite interesting format, yes it didn't quite work out,but I am smiling in the effort of being original.
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      "A gift of life...everywhere...he appreciates everything...go love...epiphany" You go girl! I get it and the format was nothing less than what you envision and too much more than most can comprehend. Nice structure and if it didnt turn out as you imagined, then that might be the way it should have been, eh?
    | Posted on 2005-02-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Epiphany

    Maybe it did not turned out to be what you expected, but you gave it a try ;0) Funny to see how other people are experimenting. Even though it did not make any sense ;0)

    Keep writing ;0)

    KNS
    | Posted on 2005-03-04 00:00:00 | by KNS | [ Reply to This ]


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