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A GUARDRD HEART


Author: RJCHANDLER
ASL Info:    30/F*GA
Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 44 /68 /23
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO MY FRIEND CORY WHO IS VISUALLY IMPAIRED, BUT HE SEES BETTER THAN MOST SIGHTED PEOPLE.


A GUARDRD HEART



IF LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING
THEN I’M GLAD YOU CAN’T SEE ME
HIDING BEHIND THIS SMILE
THE TRUTH, NOT EASY TO SEE

YET YOU SEE ME AS GUARDED
HAS MY SOUL NOW BEEN REVEALED
CAN YOU SEE DEEP INTO ME
CAN YOU SEE THROUGH MY SHIELD

ARE YOU MY KNIGHT IN ARMOR?
ARE YOU HERE TO SAVE MY SOUL
DID YOU COME HERE TO HELP ME?
IS THAT YOUR ULTIMATE GOAL?

IF I AGREE TO PLAY ALONG
ALLOWING EMOTIONS TO SHOW
WILL YOU REMAIN MY CONSTANT?
WILL YOU STAY HERE? OR GO?

I MAY BE JUST A WRITER
WHO HAS A GUARDED HEART
BUT I KNOW THAT YOU SEE ME
YOU HAVE FROM THE START

IF LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING
THEN I’M GLAD THAT YOU CAN SEE
PAST THIS GUARDED HEART
WHEN YOU LOOK RIGHT AT ME




Submitted on 2005-02-23 01:19:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  see this was a good piece.

The guarded heart phrase was a bit repetitive but that's able to be over looked. This just had me thinking that this man may be your open door out of your other post...I mean if you wont listen to yourself perhaps you will listen to this man?
| Posted on 2005-02-23 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
  This is nice. It just has an elementary style to it. The flow, the words. Some of the rhymes seemed to be forced which does the issue no justice. I was writing poems like this in middle school. Step up to the plate and hit a home run. You can do it.
| Posted on 2005-02-23 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]


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