A GUARDRD HEART
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THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO MY FRIEND CORY WHO IS VISUALLY IMPAIRED, BUT HE SEES BETTER THAN MOST SIGHTED PEOPLE.
A GUARDRD HEART
IF LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING THEN I’M GLAD YOU CAN’T SEE ME HIDING BEHIND THIS SMILE THE TRUTH, NOT EASY TO SEE YET YOU SEE ME AS GUARDED HAS MY SOUL NOW BEEN REVEALED CAN YOU SEE DEEP INTO ME CAN YOU SEE THROUGH MY SHIELD ARE YOU MY KNIGHT IN ARMOR? ARE YOU HERE TO SAVE MY SOUL DID YOU COME HERE TO HELP ME? IS THAT YOUR ULTIMATE GOAL? IF I AGREE TO PLAY ALONG ALLOWING EMOTIONS TO SHOW WILL YOU REMAIN MY CONSTANT? WILL YOU STAY HERE? OR GO? I MAY BE JUST A WRITER WHO HAS A GUARDED HEART BUT I KNOW THAT YOU SEE ME YOU HAVE FROM THE START IF LOOKS CAN BE DECEIVING THEN I’M GLAD THAT YOU CAN SEE PAST THIS GUARDED HEART WHEN YOU LOOK RIGHT AT ME |
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| see this was a good piece. The guarded heart phrase was a bit repetitive but that's able to be over looked. This just had me thinking that this man may be your open door out of your other post...I mean if you wont listen to yourself perhaps you will listen to this man? | Posted on 2005-02-23 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ] | This is nice. It just has an elementary style to it. The flow, the words. Some of the rhymes seemed to be forced which does the issue no justice. I was writing poems like this in middle school. Step up to the plate and hit a home run. You can do it. | | Posted on 2005-02-23 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ] | |
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