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    dots Submission Name: ))))Today's Ecclesiastes((((dots
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    Author: Wynne Devereaux
    ASL Info:    23 yrs.old/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 152/211/53
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1088
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       I had some inspiration but I can't even name the inspiration...I just went with what my heart wanted to pen. I hope you all can appreciate the simplistic beauty.


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    dots))))Today's Ecclesiastes((((dots
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    Meet me in the rafters of
    tomorrow.
    Caress the surface of my reason
    with illuminated brush strokes
    of understanding
    and seasonal affection.

    Touch me....
    Whisper inside of me...
    blow knowledge into my veins...
    Swim in my sea and utter my name.

    Immerse...
    Immerse...
    Immerse yourself inside the lava-esque
    glow of my complexity...then open your
    eyes and see the beauty and purity of me...

    Earth chylde...
    Natural born...
    Son of Gaea...
    Brother to the silky moon.

    Can you attend my Kabuki performance?
    See the showing of my life against
    the sky.
    Can you flourish in my atmosphere?
    Can you grow?
    Can you give?
    Can you reap?
    Can you sow?

    ...Meet me in the rafters of
    tomorrow, a bright and pure new day...
    The urgency of a renewed resurgency of...
    Understanding the beauty of you and I.
    Caress the surface of my beautiful mind.
    I take a moment to loose earthy self
    in your momential sigh.
    ...with illuminated brushstrokes of
    understanding and seasonal affection...
    individuality gives birth to a union...
    the union of US.

    2005
    Wynne D.




    Submitted on 2005-02-23 17:40:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I will be the first to comment on this poem... I like what it says, I may not understand it but I do like it.
    You are a really good writer and when I get a chance I am gonna sit down and read all of your poems that you have posted here. I hope you read mine too, one of them is dedicated to you.
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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