A wonderful red wine here, with the sweetest of aromas. Yes we live by the fruits of our labors. You my dear are an inspiration to us all, I just love your way with 'wordz' they really speak such volumns about your impending talent and what we shall see coming from your loving heart. Great work here, I have no real critizism to cause any changes. This is so very well written and carries such vibrant meaning. See you again in wordz.
This is great. It would be a good thing to put on a card. It is great that you made an origional card for your boss. That is so sweet and thoughfull. I would love to have a poem written for me on my birthday or anyday at that. It just shows how much someone cares. It also takes much more time...rather than just buying a card. You are so thoughful. mikki
Good wine, friendship.. and a beautiful day.. what more could one ask for? Aging like fruit on a vine.. I like that thought. This gives me a peaceful feeling about aging, which I will admit I'm not always so peaceful about (lol). Thanks for sharing it. Take Care! ~Sandra
Oh that is so sweet. WEll i thought it was. I wish someone would write a poem, in their own words on a card for my birthday. I bet you brightened up his day. I bet yours was the best card. I love this one..
Like the grapes on a vine that blossom to wine
So is Age
Nurtured by Sun Battered by Storm Gifted with Strength to grow
Enjoy your day as you enjoy the fruits of your vine
hmm...Maybe you can be those people that write poems on cards... Possibility stephanie
Might I first ask; Are you the Someones Epiphany that used to write here? Well written ode to the vine, and may the fruits of his labor sweeten your paychecks! What a way to ask for a raise. How much did you get? HAhahahahaaa! GRrrreat poem, and really well done. Improve nothing, for it lookks perfect to me. I shall be watchingover a few more of your things!
I can also see it on a card - which is not a bad thing. This is a very surface-y poem, but it's perfect for someone like a boss. You did a nice thing, giving this to him - and, if I may say, a gutsy one.
This was a lovely little write. I enjoyed it very much. There really is nothing to correct. mae