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    dots Submission Name: Relieveddots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I only feel relieved when I cry.
    When I feel lucid tears stream my face,
    I am purged of sadness, guilt, and shame.





    Submitted on 2004-03-30 03:29:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ok, i take that back - i don't want cry more often... i think things are fine they way they are - who wants to be a cry baby!
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Oriental, Taoist, knees on hard stone steps and a wind dried loofah to wipe your eyes.
    Sad mate.
    K
    | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]


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