Beautiful to the twisted minds soul
Love for the pleasure of pain
All that makes me feel hole
Constant thoughts brought all in vain
Kill my body
Rape my mind
Oblique thoughts running though my head
Sentiments of rough sex
Eminence at the bed
beautifully human. a good way to depict desire and everything attached to it. "constant thoughts all in vein..." as in losing oneself to the need for delirium... to find freedom between the sheets.
i have just a few concerns, though.
" Beautiful to the twisted minds soul Love for the pleasure of pain All that makes me feel hole Constant thoughts brought all in vain Kill my body Rape my mind Oblique thoughts running though my head Sentiments of rough sex Eminence at the bed "
was the piece made deliberately as it is or...
"Beautiful to the twisted mind's soul Love for the pleasure of pain All that makes me feel whole Constant thoughts brought all in vain Kill my body Rape my mind Oblique thoughts running through my head Sentiments of rough sex Eminence at the bed"
if i might have over stepped my boundaries, i'm sorry... coz i really feel that typos (if they were typos) might bring it down.
Submission Name: blackrose remix
