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    dots Submission Name: I'm Not Like Youdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI'm Not Like Youdots
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    There's something wrong with me,
    for I don't blame you for your spite.
    Instead I hate myself, blame myself,
    thinking that I deserve it,
    Though I've done nothing to provoke you.
    I could never hate,
    could never hold a grudge.
    I can't return your malice.
    I'm not your mirror;
    I'm not like you.




    Submitted on 2004-03-30 05:43:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i don't agree with Little Gal, i think your poetry is fine the way it is... but i have a feeling i've sorta read this one before - maybe one of your earlier work??
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. I like all your work, lol, but anywho as I was saying. i love how in your work you are so simple with your words, but yet so powerful.

    Julian
    | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by Nashataku | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. a very good piece.
    "I'm not your mirror
    I'm not like you"
    is a great ending. very well written.
    | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey nice poem...cuddledumplin...
    Just one thing...you should TRY and make it longer..(JUST ADVICE, NOT OFFENSE)
    | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]


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