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    dots Submission Name: Hearts Rantdots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsHearts Rantdots
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    Who am I and do I really matter,

    Whose life have I impacted or touched for the better,

    Why do I feel rejected, hurt, and left alone,

    Does anyone see me or notice that I'm here or do they just pass on by like they dont care,

    My heart is broken in a million pieces and lays on the floor being constantly stepped on,

    God I thought you loved me and that you cared,

    But when I needed you you weren't there,

    Cried out to you in despair yet only silence I recieved in return,

    Will my life get any better or will it always be this way,

    This life seems to be going down hill fast and thoughts of suicide just flood my mind,

    Rescue me, Rescue me, hold and hug me tight,

    Pleading for you to save and free me from this hellish misery,

    For you I know I'm supposed to be living but this strong heartache, pain, and hurt seems unbearable,

    Pull me to your side so I will forever be safe and protected from the enemy and right now my destructive thinking self,

    Wondering if my relationship with you still stands and if I'm even yours anymore,

    Because deep down inside I do want to live.




    Submitted on 2005-02-24 14:52:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it was very emotional, you have no problem showing your feelings and hom much pain you are in. keep it up and write more good poems.
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Freaky DA | [ Reply to This ]
      it was good i liked it this poem is like a weird out look of my life i dont no you but it seems you know me dont ever stop writing these poems
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      God only gives you what he knows you can handle. He will never give you a task too hard to achieve. Your expressions with this were rather serious. Every life is worth living. Even if you have hard times. For it is the hard times you will learn from. Whenever God knows you can't walk any further, he will come to you and carry you to safety. He may not completely rid you of all, but he will take you somewhere he knows you can rebuild strength to finish your task. You will always be a child of God. Always. Never lose faith in God or he will lose faith in you.

    Keep your head up and stay strong lil C. Better days are to come.

    Love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey u know wat li li is rite...god only give u wat u can handle... and this is all part of life...everybody has ups and downs...but dont let it bother u...just look on the beatutifuls things of life and smile away all ur troubles... and pray to god thats the most important of all things and u'll feel so much better...
    | Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]


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