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    dots Submission Name: Heart Conversation with The Fatherdots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 326
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Title is Heart conversation with the Father


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    dotsHeart Conversation with The Fatherdots
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    Wanting to go higher and deeper with the one who first loved me so,

    Yet afraid of falling from His lovingkindness, mercy, and grace,

    But realizing to that His love is so everlasting, pure, and true,

    As I lay here quietly,

    It is as though in my mind I can see,

    The Father standing at the door of my heart,

    Softly knocking and gently calling my name,

    While hoping I would just let Him in,

    Knowing in my mind He's a gentlemen and wont force himself on me,

    All the while just wanting a yes,

    Then it was as if I heard him say to me,

    "My precious one, you don't have to hide beneath your worries, doubt, low self esteem, depression, and fear,

    Because as you know I was once naked just like you and went through much suffering, agony, and pain,

    Just to save you, set you free, and break down those walls and barriers that for so long kept you from me"

    And with tears in my eyes I looked up and said "Father I'm scared to get close to you because I don't want you to ever leave me"

    He looked at me with transparent sparkles in His eyes full of love and care and said,

    "I will never leave you nor forsake you and my love for you is deeper than the oceans seas,

    With this promise please my child take as true, that I will always be with you even until this world down here called earth is done,

    Then I will take you to your real home in the sky where all your worries, fears, and doubts of this world will be forgotten and left behind,"

    So with that I finally stopped hiding under false securies and shame and said,

    "Thank You Jesus, I love you, and welcome in".




    Submitted on 2005-02-24 14:56:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was good i couldn't really tell if you was talking about your father or another at first, but let that get you cause i just over look things. But it was good.
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Freaky DA | [ Reply to This ]
      Tah dah! She's back in effect. Baby girl this was wonderful. Once again you are reaching your poetic self and sharing with us. I am so proud of you. This piece was great. The story told is one that most should listen to and try to understand. I felt your emotions and I felt your pain. It is hard allowing God into your life. Yet, it is the best decision one can make. You should be honored to have him. Never let him go.

    Love ya,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      To tell you the truth, I usally hate all types of godish writing, but this was pretty good. I like how the entire thing flowed. I may have liked it better with out the whole god thing there but that's just me.
    | Posted on 2005-02-24 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      hey this was really good... very unique and still beautiful...especially the part where jesus says my love for u is deeper than the ocean and how he'll be there when the world ends... so touching... great work.
    | Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]


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