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Estoria


Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49 /61 /32
Words: 46
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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This was inspired by The Smashing Pumpkins "Today"


Estoria


An excruciating display
of the most remarkable sound
held me in a pause

as I connected to it,
became a part of it,
I was in and of it

for a pause
for a moment in time
the sound was all there was




Submitted on 2005-02-25 05:51:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well, i was curious and read on because i wanted to know what the sound is... and then you left me hanging! is there more? i want to know what this compelling sound is!
| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  the sound was actually the smashing pumpkins,but I was trying to express the feeling when you hear music you really love and really touches you
| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by lynn marsters | [ Reply to This ]
  the sound was actually the smashing pumpkins,but I was trying to express the feeling when you hear music you really love and really touches you
| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by lynn marsters | [ Reply to This ]


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