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Why are you this way
You've changed every day
Now its your way or no way
You pick on BOB because he's gay.
I hope that your in his shoes.
Being called gay.
Fearing that your BEST friends don't aprove.
One day you might have to deal with someone like you
Your such a fagot
Why do you have to bring others down
You are the fagot
That will be your undoing
Your friends will abandon you
Your lovers to
Because all you do i put up a face
One day you'll kiss the pave
Stop whining about your past
Your fucking regressions
No one asked you to stick your veins
It was your escape
Now its your pain
You werent worried then
Whine to your fiends
pick on them
one day we will be gone
no one left
then remember who asked for this...you
| hmmm. interesting and good. It is very clearly spoken, However, it is almost like a letter rather than a poem. But It doe a great job of Expressing how you felt when you wrote it...good job.||| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by Samuel Bielz | [ Reply to This ] || Nice way you tell the tale, I'm almost there. Try not to spoil things with spelling errors "your lovers TOO" otherwise, rally good it drags you into its story, and I ended up hating him too!||| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ] || it's a long process.... I'm working on it. And by the way, a regression has nothing to do with heroin. The "pain" of the addiction is long gone, and now it's the rest I'm forgetting. |
|| Posted on 2005-03-02 00:00:00 | by Raistlin Sith | [ Reply to This ] || ok...this is very cool.to know that you would stick up for someone like is very genuine and it shows in this piece.good job!||| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by black_joker1292 | [ Reply to This ] |