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    dots Submission Name: under alldots
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    Author: fallenelf
    ASL Info:    19/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 43/56/23
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 256
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 759



    Description:
       wow i wrote this a really really long time ago. i'm just trying to find stuff to post. all my poems are under the bed and im not going all the way to get a new one. one day i'll put them on here, but anyway....i thought this one was kinda interesting. i dunno what i had in mind when i wrote it.


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    dotsunder alldots
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    a skipping stone of life
    the ether of this fake truancy
    brought sky-dived upon thee
    a love of hate
    the silence of time
    a mortal space
    unearthing secret windows
    into a crater of falsehood
    the dove, a peacekeeper
    brings upon your dawn of the day
    and yet the dusk you sleep within
    is yet little a comforter
    the rock-strewn path you lay before
    boils with the suns of thousands
    the ring of a friend denies you
    the puddle of dreams you spite
    the rainbow clouds
    the smoking embers
    are ice to what you learn
    flow away from this episode
    break the film
    curse the mind
    a personified creature
    killed twice over




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