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Submission Name: My niggas dots

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Author:	ariesmind
ASL Info:	24/Male/Atlanta
Elite Ratio:	3.82 - 75/79/18
Words:	210

Class/Type:	Rant/Serious
Total Views:	373
Average Vote:	4.0000
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My niggas dots

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My Niggas

The culture of My africana brethren has been taken away..
Community, love, and positive growth
Traded for a new world..
Institutionalized liberation

My Niggas

"Yo nigga lets go get dis smoke.
Yo nigga lets go get dis hennessy
Yo lets fuck dis bitch
Yo lets kill dis nigga"

My Niggas

Tears fill my eyes
They dont have to kill or enslave us anymore.
Mr. Willie Lynch was successfull.
We keep ourselves enslaved

and

"We strapped
so if a nigga test
he gonna wish he wore his vest".

And we are so talented, we rap and prance around wit our pants hung low, and we spend millions on our own chains

How narrow minded these brains

"Shit my nigga, Im a spend my first hundred thou. on these here Rims."

How easy it must be.
to live by the rule of "Money, Clothes, Cars and Hoes."

This is how my niggas role...

We are Kings that demand respect

We are African , born on American soil
Yes sir , yes massa, Yes maam

We niggas

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  The funny thing is i include myself in this poem..
| Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by ariesmind | [ Reply to This ]
  I see your point about the use of the word Niggas..But ...
Its a word i use in a friendly manner with some of my comrades...daily
So at the time of writing this piece...The word nigga was on tongue and not meant to segregate or offend.
Effect i guess.
But i thank you for the positivity..
| Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by ariesmind | [ Reply to This ]
  you bring up a lot of great points and things that i've thought about.... sad that clive davis benifits more than the singrs and rappers he has working for him...welll I can get started... but I should tell you, that I assoociate the use of niggas in the same light as the cahins that you speak of....why not say brothers?
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmmm...I love this ...its really provoked alot of thoughts in my head...I often sit there and wonder how humans as a whole can watch others hurt them...and then in turn hurt themselves....i dont know ...it's a strange old world right now ...It's on some kind of suicide mission ...
Anyhoo ...Like i said ...I like this ...I may not get it completely ...and definatly not at 12....*blank stare* ..but it made me think ...and when i read "tears fill my eyes" i cried with you ...
Blessed Be
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
  oooooooohhhhhhh, yuh dug deep...yuh kinda on the same streak as xtremegentleman. I like that. I can't do it but I back you guys all the way...I'm experimenting now.. maybe I 'll WOW you one day. I actually agree with you on the 'mental slavery' concept but sometimes I wonder if it's not just a process. Blacks were enslaved for sooo long and now we are just sorting out ourselves we did light years in the 60's. It's a dream for every black man to SHOW his success( that he's rollin) he doesn't think about the future he's trying to prove himself now and that's why for now there's nowhere to go. Also I LIKE the use of NIGGA , it shows a criticism from the heart yuh not talking to an "outgroup" you know... a "them" yuh talking to yuh brethren...LOVE IT
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by rytrsbloc | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this piece, its is powerful with a slowly rising sarcasm- i think that is. My fav line is:

"And we so talented, we rap and prance around wit our pants held low, and we spend millions on our own chains"

I cant say more cause i could be wrong, i got somehow lost in the middle of it:) Anyway i like it tho, it reminds me of some friends of mine who share the same opinion with you.
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by AutumnLeaves | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey , all who have commented on this peice i thank u. It was meant to provoke the mind, and there is alot of sarcasm in this peice, and the people who didnt get anything at all in this write..U are probably white...

But i can understand people from the caucus mountains, should feel uncomfortable with this peice..

Too much use of nigga huh..
Mr. Tom, and Ms Tammy, not to call any names but... yeah.

Im am not a rapper and im not trying to get reparations nor am i trying to seperate...This write was actually geared towards my brethren of colour, who i knew would kind of get it..

So thanx for the hating comments, but next time ..Think like a black man Tom..lol

And miss tammy, u white, u cant say im a "punk ass nigga"... lol..that word is forbidden for u...lol... and beleive me u may be free, but mentally alot of my brothers and sisters are mentally enslaved..

Dont get me wrong this is not a hate poem and trust me, i love all races and colours
But this was actually written with love to and for all of my brethren and "my niggas"..lol

ha ha ha, im having fun.
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by ariesmind | [ Reply to This ]
  ok, not only am I white, but I'm also from alberta canada, so I'm like superwhite, but I really like this, it had a beautiful sense of irony and sarcasm. and wether or not you appreciate the content it is beautifully writin, I think you've got a lot of talent
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by lynn marsters | [ Reply to This ]
  And we so talented, we rap and prance around wit our pants hung low, and we spend millions on our own chains

you have a brilliant mind to give it to people from a different perspective. a beautiful write, not because of form or anything remotely peotic, just because you told it. we are the majority now, we need not be ashamed anymore or feel or backs for scars. live strong my nigga.~nahlij
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  That's hot dude! Send that [censored] to Def Jam and tell Jay-Z to forward that [censored] to Russell Simmons. That's some [censored] the music industry needs to hear and translate back to the communities. They say after slaves were legally free many of them stayed at the plantations or left and eventually came back to the plantation. Still there today.
| Posted on 2005-02-28 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]

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