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    dots Submission Name: Divedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 550
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 216



    Description:
       Just a blessed day in the foothills of Northern Cali. My Auburn hair blows in the wind as I play in the yard watching Red Tail Hawks Dive from above and glide on the winds. That's Freedom!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!

    Great weekend to all and to all a great night!
    love, Epiphany ; > }


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    dotsDivedots
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    L
    I
    V
    E
    Spiritual Red Tail
    Hawk
    Door "IS" Opened
    Knock
    Green Grass
    Blushes
    Vines Beyond
    Trusses
    DIVE




    Submitted on 2005-02-26 16:10:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very different and interesting. I picked this as the first of your work to read because it had only one comment, and I see why. Why are so many people afraid to live outside the square? I too live in a nature world that never fails to daily enrich me with its beauty, but I'm not good enough to describe it. Well done.
    | Posted on 2005-03-09 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was amazing, i tried to put all the key words in a poem and fail horribly. I like the topic you have and it perfect for freedom, birds.
    The happiness you must have felt and none the less freedom must have made you numb from joy, an alternate high.
    I couldnt imagine a change to this and keep on writing.

    ACE
    | Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]


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