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    dots Submission Name: The Beastdots
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    Author: curiosityskitty
    ASL Info:    30/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 145/149/30
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Bytes: 443



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    dotsThe Beastdots
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    Untouchable you remain
    Behind stony walls of hate
    Encircling your heart
    Those walls control your fate

    Open up and let me in
    My love will bring release
    From memories that serve as chains
    And refuse to give you peace

    Let me give you refuge from
    The beast that thrives in you
    Together we’ll bring down the wall
    This beast we will subdue





    Submitted on 2005-02-26 22:51:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yep, thats me a total beast, waiting just over the moat by the alligators and piranna
    (Spelling).
    I bet though you are an expert in taming the shrew as they say, it appears this reveals the desire to at least try, and that is very commendable. I really think there is little room for improvement from my standpoint, but you are the final judge!
    Great time I've had reading you, see you later.
    | Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Love is a many splendor thing and can without a doubt tame the beast and heal the scars of the past.
    Open up and let me in
    My love will bring release
    From memories that serve as chains
    And refuse to give you peace
    I like the way you wrote this as it seems you are a very giving person.
    I think this is a very good write, you offer the hope and the remedy.
    This is proof that just a few words can really mean a lot.
    !Doc~
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]



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