Actually, this would be a good piece if you'd proofread your work. It looks bad to have misspellngs in your title. You misspelled piercing too, and moonshine is one word. The imagery is nice, but the mispellings really detract from your work. Why not use spellcheck next time? I'm not trying to be mean. I'm just offering constructive criticism. Maybe you meant to use the obscure alternate spelling "faery," but I think that's an adjective, and you used it as a noun.
This is amazing ....so magical and wonderful ....The only thing i keep wondering is where the spelling of "feary" comes from ...Just curious ....I love that picture too...I dont know which i liked more :D Good job
Submission Name: Little Dust Feary
