this thing reads like hyroglifics.. lol jk. it is good though and very interesting style used. i am guessing y0ou like jesus well i think he will like this poem alot. very well done and it so cute. take care
Short but sweet and "crystal clear" in meaning...haha crystal clear...nevermind..not funny. Well i totally agree with snacky fish. I'm guessing your very spiritual. Its good to write about your beliefs. by reading spiritual work, the reader sees the view the writer does and I find it really interesting. The poem was good and i liked it. Good Job Jan
short does not really explain much but then it doesn't have too. I can't understand what you are going on about. maybe it isjust me. i do like the poem only because it like you are hiding a secert. maybe it is written beween the lines. goodwrite any way.
Shiny things are cool...the shining son, the shining sun, the shining crystal...and of course, shining waves of eternal love. Yet another poem that requires vivid imagination on the readers part. I think of rays of sunshine through crystals on a gorgeous day. Thanks to you for the picture it puts in my head. Have a good one.
Thys was right up my ally and stuff. Lyke, oh my! For serious- it was very creative and easy on the eye. Lyke I could read it at just one glance. It just imprinted on my brain. Also, it may have killed me... Peace, love and unattractive cannibals- ~#6-