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    dots Submission Name: Crystal Cleardots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 924
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       Blessed Son Day to all!
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    dotsCrystal Cleardots

    A Crystal Kiss
    of Wisdom ; > {}
    "1" Shining Son
    in Light """"""""
    Shining Wave Eternal
    For Love < >

    Submitted on 2005-02-27 12:47:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this thing reads like hyroglifics.. lol jk. it is good though and very interesting style used. i am guessing y0ou like jesus well i think he will like this poem alot. very well done and it so cute. take care
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]
      Short but sweet and "crystal clear" in meaning...haha crystal clear...nevermind..not funny. Well i totally agree with snacky fish. I'm guessing your very spiritual. Its good to write about your beliefs. by reading spiritual work, the reader sees the view the writer does and I find it really interesting. The poem was good and i liked it. Good Job
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]
      short does not really explain much but then it doesn't have too.
    I can't understand what you are going on about.
    maybe it isjust me.
    i do like the poem only because it like you are hiding a secert. maybe it is written beween the lines. goodwrite any way.
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your message wasn't lost in your hugger-mugger style of writing. Jesus does shine for all of us. He is love personified.

    Interesting format.

    keep writing and I will keep reading
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      its different. really different. i really didn't get it though, but i respect your attempt to do something different.umm, idk i guess im just a little blank rite now.w/e/luv.~nahlij
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Shiny things are cool...the shining son, the shining sun, the shining crystal...and of course, shining waves of eternal love. Yet another poem that requires vivid imagination on the readers part. I think of rays of sunshine through crystals on a gorgeous day. Thanks to you for the picture it puts in my head.
    Have a good one.
    | Posted on 2005-02-28 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting format you have here. the message spoke loud and clear to me, though. it's a bit cryptic for those who aren't thus enlightened. i love the crystal kiss of wisdom. yes, indeed!

    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Thys was right up my ally and stuff. Lyke, oh my! For serious- it was very creative and easy on the eye. Lyke I could read it at just one glance. It just imprinted on my brain. Also, it may have killed me... Peace, love and unattractive cannibals- ~#6-
    | Posted on 2005-03-05 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]

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