Beau by Kera

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Submission Name: Beau dots

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Author:	Kera
ASL Info:	18-f-NH
Elite Ratio:	3.67 - 116/129/29
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	852
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	462

Description:
I wanted to see what it would be like in french...lol I thought it was cool, so I posted it.

Beau

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Beau coeur de bois d'ébène,
pour l'âme brûlée de la haine.
Le sang cramoisi ne passe plus,
par la beauté noire, pendant qu'elle
arrête immobile,
au-dessus d'un regroupement de l'égoutture de sang,
forment sa peau pâle.
Boitez ainsi...
pourquoi a fait ceci se produisent....
quelqu'un ainsi en valeur la vie...
maintenant sans vie, immobile... complètement.

Submitted on 2005-02-27 15:53:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  lol. i just like the originality of the french translation. i didn't understand any of it but i'll give you the credit for sitting down and figuring it out. good job.~nahlij
| Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh i adore french ...French can take a story about pea's and make it sound sexy and sensual ....Glad you posted it in this translation ....Good job
| Posted on 2005-02-28 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
  I cannot really read French, but I was able to go back and find it in English. The imagery is so vivid concerning the colors. Though the subject was not pleasant, it was not ment to be. I still enjoyed this becuase of the color images. Also was able to follwo a little once I had read the English.
| Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]

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