I cry everytime I read this, I'm not sure why, but I do. It's such a beautiful poem... I think I cry cause of everything I'm going through. I think this is wonderful... I could never have put those words together so beautifully... now tell me, are there really over a million sarahs in the US alone?? lol alright ttyl (i know this wasn't much feedback, but i couldn't think this time.)
Hell ya, I really love this poem. I feel this one to the fullest. Every word you use is perfect to discribe love, how you worded this part was my favorite. How you mention that love gives us hope nomatter how bad we're hurt or heartbroken because theres always hope that the one you love who hurt you will return and then you'll be in heaven. and how even though it brings you hope it also pulls the fear that that hope will only hurt you by never comeing true and makes you want o die right there. I love it, good, good job. It's going to my fav.