Description: my honey bunches of oats, this is for you
even if you dont move, this is about if we ever go our separate ways
move on -------------------------------------------
i know you love this new place
far away as it may be
putting this life behind, youll move on
to a better,
more expensive neck of the woods
i wish the best for you
long away from here
just all i ask is dont forget
the ones you leave behind.
I like how you say not to forget about the ones you leave behind, that is a major factor. This is a pretty poem and writen real good. I maybe wrong but what it means to me is that someone won't let another go. Love or lust and probly broken hearted, they want the other back but the other don't want them back, although the other don't want to be forgotten either. I don't know, it just seems like something the girl I love would say, But when I do move on she pulls me right back in. Anyway, good write I'm glade I choose to read it.
Submission Name: move on
