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more acronymns.......yeay! Blow me
fate
Forward progression through time and space Attributed to your acceptance.....your grace Taming my anger, nurturing my soul Equilibrium....balance....whole C ant you read between the lines? L ove, lust, everything fine I t seems shall be defined C liche, by those with boring minds H elp yourself to see true beauty E ngorged, swelling and sweet as honey |
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| ya vertical play on letters was cool. poem was cool too, write until we ran into engorged. wtf man....I had a nice g-rated image and you smahed it all to hell with that last line. I'll survive tho. shard | Posted on 2004-04-13 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ] | Love the Fate -cliché play.it seems they are woven together and u can't really know which one is which.like the line can't you read between the lines.great write.makes u really question fate. | | Posted on 2004-05-12 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ] | Interesting. Kudos to you for using acronyms. I never venture down that road except on birthdays and stuff when I do name poems, which are super unoriginal, but people like them anyway. Yeah. Good write. | ~ Niphredil | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ] | This is great. I especially liked the fate acronym. This is interesting and different. Thanks for sharing. (And NO NO NO I won't blow you. Stop asking!) | | Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ] | |
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