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fate


Author: love gone wrong
ASL Info:    27/m/colorado
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Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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more acronymns.......yeay! Blow me


fate



Forward progression through time and space
Attributed to your acceptance.....your grace
Taming my anger, nurturing my soul
Equilibrium....balance....whole


C ant you read between the lines?
L ove, lust, everything fine
I t seems shall be defined
C liche, by those with boring minds
H elp yourself to see true beauty
E ngorged, swelling and sweet as honey




Submitted on 2004-03-30 16:14:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ya vertical play on letters was cool. poem was cool too, write until we ran into engorged. wtf man....I had a nice g-rated image and you smahed it all to hell with that last line. I'll survive tho.
shard
| Posted on 2004-04-13 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
  Love the Fate -cliché play.it seems they are woven together and u can't really know which one is which.like the line can't you read between the lines.great write.makes u really question fate.
| Posted on 2004-05-12 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting. Kudos to you for using acronyms. I never venture down that road except on birthdays and stuff when I do name poems, which are super unoriginal, but people like them anyway. Yeah. Good write.

~ Niphredil
| Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]
  This is great. I especially liked the fate acronym. This is interesting and different. Thanks for sharing. (And NO NO NO I won't blow you. Stop asking!)
| Posted on 2004-03-30 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]


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