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    dots Submission Name: Distancedots
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    Author: shivaree
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/SD
    Elite Ratio:    7.93 - 27/17/11
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDistancedots
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    There was once no distance
    We would talk, laugh, love, and hate together
    I thought we were forver
    I didn't think it was to end

    We were busy but I still loved you
    When you needed me you came strait over
    And we held eachother that night

    Yet just a while later
    You say I used and betrayed you
    And that I was never there

    I cried so much and tried so hard
    So hard to win you back

    You forgot my birthday
    And not on my or another friend's birthday
    Did you care to sit with us

    You always were a drifter
    Going from friend to friend
    But I thought it was worth it
    I thought the shadow was worth the sun

    No more, though
    The more I watch the more my jealousy fades
    There's no use pinning after you any more
    I see you and I don't like what I see
    I see you fading away from yourself.

    I felt so bad about loosing you.
    But now I realize what I loved
    Was never there

    Not to stain are memories
    You were my friend
    My sister
    My blood
    But now you choose to cut our ties
    With the bluntest sword

    I hope you find your hapiness
    I hope you know I still love
    But more than anything
    I hope you find yourself.




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