Stuck in Rewind by sug90

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Submission Name: Stuck in Rewind dots

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Author:	sug90
ASL Info:	14/F/U.S.A.
Elite Ratio:	3.21 - 69/93/34
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	244
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	489

Description:
be harsh on this one please... don't worry about hurting my feelings... i already know it sucks so just help me understand y it sucks.

Stuck in Rewind dots

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Staring at these
Photographs-
Drowning in memories
Both love and betrayal
They said they would

Never look back

The past saves them
from now till forever
nothing changed
same scenerios
same scenes
none of them
exactly alike
their reality
chlidish wonder
replaces all tears
but some how,
in the past,
Lies all of
their current fears

Submitted on 2005-03-01 21:37:33 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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dont be so hard on yourself. the only thing you need to work on (in my view any way, since im still a new user) is the way its said, use um, the words that are different but mean the same, what-do-ya-call-em's. yeah, im bad at english, and just as bad at poetry.
| Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by eowyn | [ Reply to This ]

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