My mind runs fast,My words run short
When flushed with the feelings I have for you.
Throbs my heart as never before
When comes to my sight your loving image;
To my mind comes great felicity
When thoughts of youRush past me.
As drops of water Melt into the sand-
Burning in radiance and cooling thy self,
You have melted into my self
And given me new meanings
To lead on my life....
This was nice it was a good expression of emotion. I have to agree with Brooke it started off very well and the first two lines were my favourites. It was short and sweet and it is hard to communicate such feelings but in my opinion you did it well. Good write. Broken DreamsX
i love the first line: my mind runs fasst, my words run short... Yeah I know that feeling... It's almost like you don't know what to do with yourself. you have melted into my self... another good line! Great write!